Jord 9970

[Jordmaniac]

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[SV]

it's messy, but well-proportioned from what i can see. you might want to shrink it a bit though.

[whipster]

It's very messy, you should re-draw it with lines cleaner.<br>Proportions and perspective are very good<br>I also like styling<br>Keep it up and welcome on CSS <IMG NAME="icon" SRC="http://www.germancarfans.com/images/forums/beerchug.gif" BORDER="0">

[taskbearer]

First I'd have to commend you on a really mouth opening job from someone your age. Just like the others said, try redrawing to clean up ur work. Anyways keep practicing and never stop!!